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The bar chart shows information about the favorite subiects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows information about the favorite subiects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the percentage of different
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subject
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subjects
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 that
students
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 favour in
school
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 A and
school
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B
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Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the
students
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 in class A like
sport
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most
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the most
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,
while
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 the most popular
subject
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 for
school
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B
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students
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 is drawing.
By contrast
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,science is the least popular in
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B
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,
while
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this
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 data in
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 A is related to drawing.
And the
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The
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 most significant difference between
two
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the two
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 schools is
sport
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sports
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. There are two subjects in which the
school
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 A
students
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 enjoy more than the
school
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B
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students
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.
While
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 more than 70%
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school
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of school
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 A
students
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 like
sport
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,the data of
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B
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students
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 loving that
subject
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 is considerably lower with only 10%.With regards to science,the figure of the
school
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 A
students
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 who favour that
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 is about 18% as opposed to just under 5% for
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B
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students
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.
On the other hand
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,more
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B
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students
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 favour
in
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apply
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the three subjects compared to the
school
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 A
students
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.As many as 20%
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students
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of students
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 from
school
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B
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 prefer math in comparison to 12%
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students
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of students
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 from
school
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 A.
Similarly
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,more
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B
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students
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 like literature than
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 A
students
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,approximately 38% and 10% respectively.The difference,in terms of drawing,is maximal with over 40% more
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students
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 loving that
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 than
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B
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students
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words subject, students, school, b with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • favorite subjects
  • popularity
  • comparison
  • significant differences
  • similar levels of interest
  • subject preference
  • curriculum
  • facilities
  • impact
  • trend
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