Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

A downright variance of view has been observed among the masses regarding the unfavourable

competititive infucence

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competitive influence

of educational institutes on

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.A social segment of society contends that the competitive environment of schools is necessary for

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grooming,opponents,meanwhile,adhere to the notion of unconstructive impacts of competition on

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lives.The ensuing paragraphs will proffer an insight into both doctrines and explain the necessity of challenging conditions. Not endorsed by everyone,yet

appproved

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approved

by some individuals that the competitive environments

infucence

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influence

adults

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mental health in

detrimental

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manner.To expand,every

humans

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has their own capabilities and strengths,

as a result

, some are good at studies ,meanwhile, some are good

in

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sports,

hence

,it's

nature

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distribution.

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,my friend

who has commit

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sucide

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suicide

,after failing

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exams,

due to

pressure

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of social fear and failure. Disjunctive to

this

, the idea of competition among students in

centre

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of learning acts as

more

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beneficial tool which is attested by

by

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a

myriads

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of people.The fundamental element associated with

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mechanism is the advantage of

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which helps students to boast their strengths and knowledge,for getting higher grades.

Moreover

,as

this

world is becoming

challenging

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day by day,If a student faces difficulties and challenges throughout his developing years,where he has to learn about the world,

as a result

, they can prepare

himselves

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themselves

for

umpcoming

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upcoming

challenges.

For instance

,in Asia,individuals usually get

higher

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superior employment,as they

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struggle from

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early

ages

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,

due to

lack

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of support in terms of

finance and

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support.

To conclude

,both arguments carry their own reasoning,logic and pragmatism.

Albiet

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Albeit

,

challenging

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environment in educational institutes seems advantageous in the long run

due to

its weighty,indispensable and fringe benefits.