The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.
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The changes that happened in three various areas of crime in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012 are displayed in the given chart.
Overall
, there was a downward trend among all types of crime throughout the period.
Moreover
, the
cases
of burglary experienced the most striking changes compared to other crimes. In 2003, the least popular crime in Newport city centre was a robbery. Over time the number of robberies fluctuated but in 2012 it reached the same level that was in 2003, with about 600
cases
per
year
. Regarding car theft crimes, having dropped in 2006, its value started to go up and reached a peak in 2012, when it was approximately 2600
cases
of car theft in a
year
.
According to
data, the number of burglaries increased in 2004 before experiencing a sharp decline until 2008. In that
year
the number of bulgaries was just over 1100
cases
per
year
and
then
reaching about 1400, it remained stable.
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