A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there
Hi, Anna
It’s nice to hear you! I can’t
wait
your arrival. So, I decided to give you some Add the preposition
wait for
advices
about living in our town. First of all, the Change the wording
advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
center
is the best part of the city to liveChange the spelling
centre
, because
, you have to go about five Change preposition
in, because
minute
to the supermarket. In fact, almost all restaurants are located in Change to a plural noun
minutes
this
area.
At this
time, the public transport in this
district is also
very comfortable. You can go any
location in Change preposition
to any
this
town, it taking
twenty minutes. If you Wrong verb form
takes
decided
to go Wrong verb form
decide
in
another big Change preposition
to
cites
you can go to Fix the agreement mistake
city
railway
station to take a bus. In Correct article usage
the railway
south
direction there is a Chisinau there you can spend the weekend.
Correct article usage
the south
However
, in our town often arranged public meetings where you can meet a
good people. Correct article usage
apply
Also
, you might be friendly with your colleges
to make new friends. Humans in Replace the word
colleagues
this
area are absolutely adorable.
Lots of love.Submitted by acaitaz on
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grammar
Ensure that each sentence is grammatically correct to enhance clarity. For example, 'so, I decided to give you some advices' should be 'so, I decided to give you some advice'.
grammar
Pay attention to verb tense consistency. For instance, 'it taking twenty minutes' should be 'it takes twenty minutes'.
task achievement
The letter covers all the points asked in the task.
task achievement
The letter maintains a friendly and warm tone, which is appropriate for the task.
structure
Paragraphs are used effectively to separate different ideas.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite