A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest an interesting part of the city to live in • describe the public transport in your city • say how your friend can meet new people there

Hi, Anna It’s nice to hear you! I can’t
wait
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wait for
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your arrival. So, I decided to give you some
advices
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advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
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about living in our town. First of all, the
center
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centre
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is the best part of the city to live
, because
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in, because
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, you have to go about five
minute
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minutes
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to the supermarket. In fact, almost all restaurants are located in
this
area. At
this
time, the public transport in
this
district is
also
very comfortable. You can go
any
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to any
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location in
this
town, it
taking
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takes
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twenty minutes. If you
decided
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decide
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to go
in
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to
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another big
cites
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city
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you can go to
railway
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the railway
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station to take a bus. In
south
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the south
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direction there is a Chisinau there you can spend the weekend.
However
, in our town often arranged public meetings where you can meet
a
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apply
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good people.
Also
, you might be friendly with your
colleges
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to make new friends. Humans in
this
area are absolutely adorable. Lots of love.
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grammar
Ensure that each sentence is grammatically correct to enhance clarity. For example, 'so, I decided to give you some advices' should be 'so, I decided to give you some advice'.
grammar
Pay attention to verb tense consistency. For instance, 'it taking twenty minutes' should be 'it takes twenty minutes'.
task achievement
The letter covers all the points asked in the task.
task achievement
The letter maintains a friendly and warm tone, which is appropriate for the task.
structure
Paragraphs are used effectively to separate different ideas.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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