The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant
The table provides information about McGill University's results of surveys across five categories—(Teaching quality, Library resources, student services, Range of modules offered, and consistent increase from 86 in 2005 to 88 in 2010
sports
and social facilities
)—over the years
2005 , 2010 , and 2015. The data is presented as Numbers , showing the changes in each category over the given period
.
Overall
, it can be observed that Library resources consistently had the highest values throughout the period
, while
The range of modules offered showed a decline over time. Additionally
, Sports
and social facilities
experienced a consistent trend across the years
.
In 2005, Teaching quality started at 74, and it decreased to 72 in 2010 ,and then
increased reaching 78 in 2015. Meanwhile, Library resources showedAdd an article
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and dropped to 87 in 2015
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On the other hand
, student services experienced a significant increase starting at 54 in 2005 and rising to 95 by 2015, showing the most improvement in this
period
.
However
, the range of modules offered witnessed a steady decline over the years
, from 39 in 2005 to 25 in 2015. In contrast
, sports
and social facilities
remained unchanged throughout the period
, staying at 65 in all three years
.
In conclusion, the data demonstrates a clear improvement in student services over the given years
, while
sports
and social facilities
showed little to no variation. The overall
trend indicates a mixed trend across the categories.Submitted by marimal.ali880 on
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