The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant

The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005, 2010 and 2015 about McGill University.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant
The table provides information about McGill University's results of surveys across five categories—(Teaching quality, Library resources, student services, Range of modules offered, and
sports
and social
facilities
)—over the
years
2005 , 2010 , and 2015. The data is presented as Numbers , showing the changes in each category over the given
period
.
Overall
, it can be observed that Library resources consistently had the highest values throughout the
period
,
while
The range of modules offered showed a decline over time.
Additionally
,
Sports
and social
facilities
experienced a consistent trend across the
years
. In 2005, Teaching quality started at 74, and it decreased to 72 in 2010 ,and
then
increased reaching 78 in 2015. Meanwhile, Library resources showed
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and dropped to 87 in 2015
On the other hand
, student services experienced a significant increase starting at 54 in 2005 and rising to 95 by 2015, showing the most improvement in
this
period
.
However
, the range of modules offered witnessed a steady decline over the
years
, from 39 in 2005 to 25 in 2015.
In contrast
,
sports
and social
facilities
remained unchanged throughout the
period
, staying at 65 in all three
years
. In conclusion, the data demonstrates a clear improvement in student services over the given
years
,
while
sports
and social
facilities
showed little to no variation. The
overall
trend indicates a mixed trend across the categories.
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