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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The four pie charts compare the percentage of the population in three age groups in
Yemen
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, and Italy in 2000, and
also
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 the prediction for 2050. In general, middle-aged
people
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 both in Italy, and
Yemen
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 comprised the substantial population in 2000, and 2050. Concerning Italians,
people
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 aged 15-59 years accounted for the largest
number
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, which took up over half of the percentage (61.6%).
However
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, the figure for the youngest
people
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 was 24.1%.
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,
people
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 in
Yemen
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 aged 0-14 years made up the biggest figure(50.1%) among other age groups,
whereas
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 there were a few oldest
people
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 with a
number
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 3.6%.
According to
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 the forecast of the population of Italy in 2050, 60-plus-year-old
people
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 will increase as many as 42.3%, which is twice the
number
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 in 2000.
On the contrary
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, the
statistic
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 of the 15-59 year group will drop to 46.2%. In the case of
Yemen
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, the
number
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 of youngsters is said to fall to 37% in 2050
while
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 the percentage of the 15-59 year group will grow to 57.3%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, people, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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