The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
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The given process illustrates the
production
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of a biofuel which is
also
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named
as
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ethanol
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. Generally speaking,
this
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formation undergoes several stages to be fully formed, which starts with the growth of trees and plants, ending up with chemical adds. The vital source for the creation of
ethanol
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is energy, which is released from both sunlight and carbon dioxide. After harvesting, most of the
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are stored in a machine, that grinds the crop into even small pieces.
This
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step is called, pre-processing,
as well as
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at the later stages the process goes under chemical experiment. Moving on
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next part, cellulose is likely to
the
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vital step of the
production
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, since it is the result of the pre-processing stage
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and the starting point of the chemical way in the
production
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of
ethanol
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. During
this
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step, sugars are formed and microbes are added to the substance, so after
ethanol
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can be fully created.
In addition
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to that,
ethanol
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is essential in
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transports
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, and
this
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usage emits carbon dioxide which
is
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also plays
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also
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plays a vital role in the
production
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of
ethanol
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, ethanol with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • biomass
  • ethanol
  • fermentation
  • microorganisms
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • distillation
  • purification
  • dehydration
  • raw materials
  • storage
  • distribution
  • renewable energy
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • sustainable fuel
  • concentration
  • impurities
  • alcohol content
  • crop growth
  • conversion process
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