The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Central
Library
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between two decades ago and how it appears now.
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, twenty years ago, the Central
Library
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was divided into four rooms with a communal area in the centre of the
library
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. Today, it has one bigger
room
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for
children’s
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fiction
books
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and storytelling events. In terms of the floor plan two decades ago, Central
Library
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had one
entrance
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and
divided
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into four rooms about the same size. On the right
side
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of the
entrance
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door, there was an enquiry desk, where visitors might buy tickets and return a book. Just across the desk, there was a
room
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for
children’s
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books
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, and in front of the
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room
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there was a hallway with adult non-fiction collections.
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on the left
side
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of the
library
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, there was a reading
room
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beside the
entrance
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and an entertainment
room
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to access CDs, videos, and computer games on the other
side
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. Between them, there was an adult fiction
books
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section, left to the tables and chairs located in the centre of the
library
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. Today,
while
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the
entrance
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of the
library
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remained, the layout of the
library
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had been changed. A cafe had been constructed on the right
side
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of the
entrance
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replacing the enquiry desk, which moved to the hallway on the right
side
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of the building. Across the cafe, there is a lecture
room
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, which previously was a
room
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for
children’s
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collection.
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, there is one biggest
room
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on the left
side
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of the
library
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, containing
children’s
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fiction
books
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and a communal area with two sofas and a space for storytelling events. In front of
this
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biggest
room
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, there is a hallway with all reference
books
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and a computer
room
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, children’s, books, entrance, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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