The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps give information about the changes
of
Central Change preposition
in
Library
between two decades ago and how it appears now.
Overall
, twenty years ago, the Central Library
was divided into four rooms with a communal area in the centre of the library
. Today, it has one bigger room
for children’s
fiction books
and storytelling events.
In terms of the floor plan two decades ago, Central Library
had one entrance
and divided
into four rooms about the same size. On the right Add a missing verb
was divided
side
of the entrance
door, there was an enquiry desk, where visitors might buy tickets and return a book. Just across the desk, there was a room
for children’s
books
, and in front of the room
there was a hallway with adult non-fiction collections. Add a comma
room,
While
on the left side
of the library
, there was a reading room
beside the entrance
and an entertainment room
to access CDs, videos, and computer games on the other side
. Between them, there was an adult fiction books
section, left to the tables and chairs located in the centre of the library
.
Today, while
the entrance
of the library
remained, the layout of the library
had been changed. A cafe had been constructed on the right side
of the entrance
replacing the enquiry desk, which moved to the hallway on the right side
of the building. Across the cafe, there is a lecture room
, which previously was a room
for children’s
collection. Additionally
, there is one biggest room
on the left side
of the library
, containing children’s
fiction books
and a communal area with two sofas and a space for storytelling events. In front of this
biggest room
, there is a hallway with all reference books
and a computer room
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, children’s, books, entrance, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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