the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002
The table shows information by category on consumer
expenditure
on different items in Ireland, Italy,
Spain
,
Sweden
, and
Turkey
in 2002.
Firstly
, all the five countries spent the most on food, drinks and tobacco. People in
Turkey
spent 32.14% of their income on
this
category, followed by Ireland at 28.91%.
While
citizens in Italy,
Spain
and
Sweden
used up only
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per cent, at 16.36%, 18.80%, and 15.77%, with
this
,
Sweden
had the least spending on these items.
Next,
consumers in Italy spent 9.00% of their
expenditure
on clothing and footwear, making them the biggest spenders on them. Ireland,
Spain
and
Turkey
had similar proportions, ranging from 6.63% to 6.43%, but the Swedish spent merely 5.40% on clothes and shoes.
Lastly
, leisure and Education were the smallest
expenditure
among all these three categories in all five countries. Even in
Turkey
where the spending was the greatest, the figure was only 4.35%. Following
Turkey
, there was
Sweden
at 3.22% and Italy at 3.20% of their money consumed on entertainment.
Spain
was the lowest spending country in
this
category, at 1.98%. In conclusion, the population of four European countries plus
Turkey
had the highest expenses for food, drinks, and tobacco in 2002.
Nevertheless
, leisure and education had the smallest percentage of consumer
expenditure
.
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  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
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  • variation
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