The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population In four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population In four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
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The line graph illustrates the
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number of
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population
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in four Southeast Asia countries from 1970 to 2020 and its predicted
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in 2030 and 2040.
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, there was an upward trend in terms of
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in Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia and the
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is expected to continue increasing for the next twenty years. Meanwhile, the Phillippines experience a minor decline but will rise gradually by the end of the period. Malaysia had a total of 30%
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the beginning of the period.
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reached three-quarters in 2020 and is projected to reach almost 90% in 2040.
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, Indonesia's
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also
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grew steadily, but its starting
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was the lowest among all countries with only around 15%
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. In 2020,
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accounted
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% of the
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and is expected to have another increase in 2040 with 60%. Thailand began with just below 20% and only had a slight growth over thirty years. In 2040,
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will increase sharply to almost 50%. The Phillippines started with the same exact
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as Malaysia.
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experienced a decline in 2010 accounting
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40% of
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population
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the population
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.
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, the
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will increase
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50% of
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the population
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in 2040.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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