The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population In four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population In four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph illustrates the
number of
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population
in four Southeast Asia countries from 1970 to 2020 and its predicted
number
in 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in terms of
citizen
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in Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia and the
number
is expected to continue increasing for the next twenty years. Meanwhile, the Phillippines experience a minor decline but will rise gradually by the end of the period. Malaysia had a total of 30%
population
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the beginning of the period.
This
number
reached three-quarters in 2020 and is projected to reach almost 90% in 2040.
Likewise
, Indonesia's
population
also
grew steadily, but its starting
number
was the lowest among all countries with only around 15%
population
. In 2020,
this
number
accounted
50
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% of the
population
and is expected to have another increase in 2040 with 60%. Thailand began with just below 20% and only had a slight growth over thirty years. In 2040,
this
number
will increase sharply to almost 50%. The Phillippines started with the same exact
number
as Malaysia.
This
number
experienced a decline in 2010 accounting
only
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40% of
population
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.
However
, the
population
will increase
with
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50% of
population
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the population
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in 2040.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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