The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004
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The line graph illustrates the
consumption
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of fish and a few divergent kinds of animal protein in a European region from 1979 to 2004. The number is measured in
grams
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per person per week. All lines shown in the graph were erratic but showed different trends. Three kinds of meat experienced a downward.
First,
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beef, in 1979, was the highest among the other four types of meat consumed, constituting above 200
grams
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,
then
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it experienced a slight decrease of approximately 170
grams
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in 1981.
However
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, the
consumption
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climbed up to around 240
grams
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, which reached a peak in 1983. Since
then
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, the trend showed a reduction in the request
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beef and touched approximately 100
grams
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.
Initially
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, about 150
grams
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of lamb were eaten,
then
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the number dropped by almost three times to 60
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in 2004. Fish was the least type of protein people consumed, about 60
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at the beginning of the period.
Consumption
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fell steadily and in 2004 people had above 50
grams
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of lamb for their meals. The demand for poultry was under 150
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at the beginning, afterwards it increased rapidly to above 150
grams
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until 1982 which took over lamb’s demands. In the end, the majority of people chose chicken as their main source of protein and
consumption
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was under 250
grams
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.
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, during 25 years,
chicken
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the chicken
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took over beef as the most favoured flesh. Meanwhile, fish remained the lowest type among the other four proteins eaten.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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