The table illustrates the expense of the consumer on various items in five countries (Ireland, Turkey, Italy, Spain and Sweden) in the year of 2002.
The table compares data about the expenditure of the national consumer on various items in five
countries
in the year 2002 .
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Overall
, it is evident that spending on food, drinks and tobacco dominated in all Linking Words
countries
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while
the expense consumed on leisure and education was the lowest in the same year .
To start with , Turkey recorded a percentage of 32.14% which is the highest in Food and drinks, Linking Words
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to tobacco , followed by Ireland which had a percentage of 28.91% . Linking Words
However
, Spain's spending was relatively low in comparison to the previously mentioned Linking Words
countries
, and the national consumption was 18.80% . Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Italy and Spain had the Linking Words
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lowest percentages with 16.63 and 15.77% respectively .
Spending on Clothing and footwear in all five Remove the redundancy
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countries
was almost equal except for Italy with 9.00% of its consumer expenses.
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Finally
, Italy and Sweden consumers spent roughly 3.00% on leisure and education .Linking Words
Also
, Spain and Ireland spent less by around 0.5 % on these items . Yet , Turkey consumers paid out 4.35% on these items .Linking Words
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