The table below shows the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts the number of
research
students
and the pie chart illustrates the proportion
of them. Both charts compare data between 2001 and 2010 in Australian university
.
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universities
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of research
students
increased over time and local students
dominated in both years.
In 2001, there was
33,657 local Change the verb form
were
research
scholars which gradually grew to 39,488 students
by 2010.
It showed majority students
come from Change preposition
of students
indigeneous
Correct your spelling
indigenous
area
, amounting to 87% of total Fix the agreement mistake
areas
students
in the first period. Additionally
, the proportion
of male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
was similar, Fix the agreement mistake
females
accounted
for 44% and 43%, respectively. Wrong verb form
accounting
However
, the total percentage decreased to 73% by 2010, with similar
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a similar
proportion
between boys and girls, 35% and 38%, respectively.
In contrast
, in 2001, the number of international research
students
was only 5,192, however
, it sharply climbed to 14,593 scholars by 2010. In the meantime, the total of international students
was only 13%, with the proportion
of 9% girls and 4% boys and tt
firmly climbed to double (27%) by the end of Correct your spelling
it
period
, with Add an article
the period
the
Correct article usage
a
proportion
of 12% women and 15% men.Submitted by chocolate10
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Vocabulary: Replace the words research, students, proportion with synonyms.
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