The table below shows the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts the number of
research
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students
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and the pie chart illustrates the
proportion
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of them. Both charts compare data between 2001 and 2010 in Australian
university
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.
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, it can be seen that the number of
research
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students
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increased over time and local
students
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dominated in both years. In 2001, there
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33,657 local
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scholars which gradually grew to 39,488
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by 2010. It showed majority
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students
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come from
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indigenous
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, amounting to 87% of total
students
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in the first period.
Additionally
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, the
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of
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and
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females
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was similar,
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for 44% and 43%, respectively.
However
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, the total percentage decreased to 73% by 2010, with
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proportion
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between boys and girls, 35% and 38%, respectively.
In contrast
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, in 2001, the number of international
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students
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was only 5,192,
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, it sharply climbed to 14,593 scholars by 2010. In the meantime, the total of international
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was only 13%, with the
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of 9% girls and 4% boys and
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firmly climbed to double (27%) by the end of
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, with
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proportion
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of 12% women and 15% men.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words research, students, proportion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
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