The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.

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table illustrates statistics about

worldwide

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the worldwide

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share of the mobile phone market in 2005 and 2006.

Overall

, as we can see

that

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there are 7 types of phone which

was

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manufactered

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manufactured

in the past time. There are some kinds like

nokia

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Nokia

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,

samsung

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Samsung

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,

L.G

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LG

,

motorola

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Motorola

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,

sony

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Sony

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and the

last

one is

BenQ

Mobile. So,

this

is predicted that the highest percentage of sharing

phone's

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phones

phone

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in 2005 was

nokia

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Nokia

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with 32.5

percent

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and the lowest one was BenG with only 4.9.

Then

,

after

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one year later

this

diagram was almost the same number with dividing telephone.

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, the percentage of

nokia

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was

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increased

for

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35, but,

unfortunately

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the number of

BenQ

was decreasing

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for

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a

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twice

than

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2005

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of 2005

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.

However

, other classifications like

motorola

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Motorola

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and

sony

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Sony

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increased dramatically

at the end

of the year.

Hence

, it was expected that

nokia

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Nokia

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and

motorola

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Motorola

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rise til 2006, when,

Benq

with L.g fell into the lowest quantity above them.

At

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the end, the highest

percent

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in

this

table was

nokia

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Nokia

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and the lowest

from

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of

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all of them was

Benq

between 2005 and 2006.