The table below gives information about the amount of tax collected (as % of GDP) ion five countries for 4 years between 1975 and 2005. Summarising brief summary. At least 150 words.
The table illustrates the detailed
amount
of tax
compared to the GDP of each country during the 30 ye
ars from 1975 to 2005.
Overview. This
graph illustrates the rise and fall compared to the amount
of tax
in five countries starting with the USA, Korea, Japan, Turkey and ending with Sweden. The graph mostly rose however
there were some exceptions for example
In Turkey which was in 1985.
In 1975 in Sweden the tax
was 46% and after a decade it grew and had become
47% and in 1995 the indicator of the Wrong verb form
became
tax
showed 51% finally
in 2005 the amount
of tax
consisted of 70.1%.
In the USA tax
was 25.1% in 1975 after ten years it had increased to
Change preposition
from
the
25.4% in 1975 its growth to the Correct article usage
apply
level
of 27.1% at the end
in
2005 it was 27.4%.
In Korea Change preposition
of
tax
was 1975 15.1% however
in 1985 it grew intensively and had become 27% in spite of that in 1995 the tax
decreased to the level
of
26% in 2005 the amount
of tax
had become 27.3%.
Japan started in 1975 the tax
with 15% and this
slightly growth in 1985 to the level
of 16% in 1985 the tax
increased incredibly to the level
of 23% and by the end of 2005 it had reached 32.1%
In Turkey tax
was 16.4% in 1975, and during the next ten years in 1985 it decreased to the amount
of 15% despite that in 1995 the tax
grew to the level
of 24% at
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apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
end
in 2005 it ended at 27.4%.Correct your spelling
and
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