The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.

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The given maps illustrate the changes which took place in Lynwich

College

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in 2006 and in the current day.

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it is clear that

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,today's many significant challenges related to facilities

which

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apply

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were added compared to the past map of the

college

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. In the year 2006,

area

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the area

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was

fulfild

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fulfilled

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with

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trees.Today's library was constructed in spite of cutting down

treese

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trees

which were in the southwest part of the

college

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and

college

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building 2 which was above is stayed unchanged.

Moreover

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,the Sports field which is situated in the southeast of

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college

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the college

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was expanded.

By contrast

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car

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the car

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park of the

noutherneast

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southernmost

was

shrinked

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shrunk

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and

the

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apply

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bike storage was established nearby it.

However

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,below

these

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these,

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the library was replaced into

sports

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a sports

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center

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centre

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.The most noticeable is that

new

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a new

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cafeteria was built

in stead

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instead

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of the path which has

the

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apply

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access to all 6

facities

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facilities

In addition

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,the bus station was established below the

northest

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northern

road.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words college with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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6
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

141 words

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