The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
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The chart displays the results of a
survey
conducted about adult education . The bar chart illustrates why adults decided to Use synonyms
study
.The pie chart shows how individuals think about how the costs must be shared .
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Overall
, it is evident that most of the individuals choose to Linking Words
study
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due to
their interest in the subject or to gain the qualification . Only a minority of the people decided to obtain a degree in order to meet people .
First of all , the result of the Linking Words
survey
conducted showed that 40% of the course's cost should be paid by the individuals and 35% of the spending to be paid by the employer . Use synonyms
However
, only 25% of the total cost should be paid from taxpayer money .
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Secondly
, a part of the Linking Words
survey
discussed the causes why students decided to Use synonyms
study
their major . 40% of the students had an interest in the degree . Use synonyms
Furthermore
, 38% of the scholars desired to acquire a qualification . Linking Words
Additionally
, 22% of the students were employees who were eager to Linking Words
study
because the degree is helpful with their ongoing jobs. The percentage of people who studied to improve their prospects of promotion, Use synonyms
as well as
those who want to enjoy the studying Linking Words
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process
proccess
was 20% . Only 12% did Add the comma(s)
proccess,
this
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due to
their desire to change their career . Linking Words
Finally
, those who decided to join classes to communicate and socialize were 9% of the total percentage of the Linking Words
survey
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "due to".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words survey, study with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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