One of your neighbor’s children has accidentally broken the front window of your car. You should write a letter to his/her parents and in your letter you should • introduce yourself • explain how it happened • and what they should do.
Dear Mr Smith,
My name is George and I have been your neighbour since
last
week, I have just moved in next to your house. My address is Private Drive number 4. I am writing this
letter to bring your attention to the unpleasant situation that happened today.
I am really sorry but unfortunately, I have to complain about your son's behaviour, today around 10 AM he damaged my car. Moving into more detail he was playing some games on the street and in one moment threw a stone and accidentally broke the front window of my car. It was a very serious crash additionally
, he tried to run away after
this
unpleasant accident. I hope it was an accident and the boy didn't do it on purpose.
I don't want to cause you additional problems, but unfortunately, you will have to pay for your son's damages. I have already checked how much the new windows does it cost. It will be 400$ for the window and additionally
200$ for the mechanics. Of course, if you don't have any money now, I can wait until next month, it is not a big problem.
I look forward to receiving your response and taking the necessary actions.
Yours sincerely,
George WilsonSubmitted by dariusz.slusar on
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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking your longer paragraph into two smaller ones for better readability. This can make each point clearer and the letter more organized.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to vary your sentence structure to avoid repetitiveness and enhance overall readability.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear and appropriate greeting and closing, which contributes to a formal tone.
task achievement
The letter covers all required points of the task: introduction, explanation, and proposed solution.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitably formal and polite, reflecting a good sense of appropriateness.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite