The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart above displays the even monthly variations in the prices of three metals in 2014, including copper,
nickel
, and zinc
.
According to
the chart, the variation degree of copper and zinc
is steadier in comparison to that of nickel
, but their collective trends are similar, presenting a "v".
At the beginning of 2014, the average change of zinc
was 1%, which, after a temporary increase to 3% in February, constantly decreased to -1% in June. The depression lasted for 4 months when the percentage of zinc
was always around -0.5%. Towards the end of the year, the proportion of zinc
gradually recovered to the level of this
March, 2%. The situation of copper was basically similar, despite with a milder extent.
On the contrary
, the monthly variations of nickel
were considerably remarkable. In January, the percentage was 6%, which rapidly declined to 1% within two months, and dropped further
to the lowest point of -3% in June. But without any hesitation, the proportion of nickel
bounced back to -1% in the next month,
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finally
returned to the level of 1% in November.Submitted by hx88375757 on
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