In many countries, the number of people suffering from stress is increasing. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to tackle it?

It is unarguably that a large number of

people

are currently suffering from stress at a promising rate across the globe, some

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that financial status can possibly

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people

to stress out and the

government

should step in to tackle

this

alarming trend by providing some policy related with dealing mental health issue. Both factors and possible measures to tackle it will be discussed

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essay.

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with, it seems sensible that there are various possibilities that individuals could

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, yet, financial issue is often the case that several

people

upset the most.

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because we currently

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in a money-driven world

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everything costs

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is why everyone is struggling to make a living. In

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struggling to survive in

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consumerism world

for paying

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bills

while

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a living can be stressful.

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,

this

is especially worse for

low income

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groups that

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barely survive physically

while

maintaining mental health.

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, I personally think that there are several solutions to tackle

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problem. Importantly, the

government

should hand in their hand to

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this

issue as it is the health problem of their citizens. Promoting

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are some of the examples that the

government

can do. Norway,

for instance

,

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break time for relaxation

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their employees. Norwegians agree that they felt much more relaxed with

this

small break to get rid of

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worriness

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. In summary,

although

it is undeniable that causing

people

to

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stress, I am of the opinion that financial problem is

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factor that induce

people

to

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bad as they trying to make a living and

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with

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help from the

government

such

as

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bill

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or raise the awareness of relaxation can reduce

this

negative emotion.