Some people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Due to

the Earth's damage done by human activities, many

agrees

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that

this

planet will be no longer inhabitable for humans and other creatures.

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, they believe it is our

responsible

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to search for another Earth-like planet. I

am strongly disagree

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strongly disagree

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as

this

will raise

another upcoming issues

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and a waste of

time

since the search will be a doubt.

Firstly

, the research will be

as

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another whole commitment

for

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one’s country.

This

is because the exploration of new things in outer space cannot be simply taken for granted as the country needed to labour

million

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or even

billion

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billions

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of their money in order for

this

finding to be successful. Costs

such

as building spaceships,

paying

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for scientists and an engineering team needed to

be consider

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as the nation’s responsibilities.

Instead

, the

miilions

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millions

of

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dollar

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should be

spending

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to improve on technologies

on fixing

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to fix

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Earth's environment. To add more,

time

also

can be one of the most important

factor

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as travelling through the universe is

time consuming

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considering human’s span lives are short and there is a big

possibilities

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this

research will

postpone

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to the new generations.

Moreover

, the government should spend more

of

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the

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time

on

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taking

a

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full action

on fixing

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to fix

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the Earth’s condition before it's getting

more

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worse rather than finding

new

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home which is a doubt

wether

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it

is exist

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or not. In conclusion, it is human’s duty

of

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what

causing

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our world to be in

such

a critical condition and our’s to bring back the Earth’s habitable condition rather than find a new planet and decide to abandon

this

world.