Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think being a celebrity brings more benefit or more problems?
Some
people
suggest that being a celebrity
can bring problems
as well as
benefits
. While
can bring problems
being a celebrity
like having less privacy
or being affected mental health by people
's opinions, I believe that the benefits
can override them because famous people
can earn more money because of their image
and can have better treatment in public spaces.
Having less privacy
is one of the drawbacks of being a celebrity
. This
affects famous people
wherever they go. They are pursued to have a photograph or an interview in the middle of the street. Therefore
, everybody knows where they went and why, having less privacy
and affecting their mental health if they listen to negative people
's opinions about them or their actions. For example
, Angelina Jolie went to an appointment with a surgeon to operate on her breast, someone knew about this
so the paparazzi pursued her to have an interview during this
delicate time. Therefore
, not permitting her to have the privacy
she deserves and the mental space to deal with that situation.
Although
there are some problems
with being a celebrity
, I believe that the benefits
can outweigh them. One of the main benefits
famous people
can have is earn more money due to
their image
. They can participate in marketing, selling their image
to promote certain products. Furthermore
, when they go to a restaurant or a public space, they have better treatment like having the best table in the restaurant without waiting or having a reservation when the place is usually fully booked. For instance
, in a television show, I listened to how an actress who was not well known at that time was using George Clonney's name to have reservations in restaurants that were completely booked.
To conclude
, even though being famous can bring some problems
like less privacy
or affect their mental health negatively, I strongly believe that the benefits
override them because they can earn more money with their image
and can have better treatment in public spaces.Submitted by jessica.pastor.87 on
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introduction conclusion
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coherence cohesion
Overall logical structure is maintained with one drawback and the benefits discussed.