The map below shows the development of the museum between 2010 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the museum between 2010 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the changes
of
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in
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the museum between 2010 and 2013.
Overall
, the museum lost its garden and started to serve various needs by more facilities being added and some being extended in their space. Starting with the the map of 2010, the space for mammals was located next to the Ocean
hall
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Hall
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while
a dinosaurs
section
was placed below it. There was a ticket desk, which was located on the left side of the lobby. Beside the building, there was a garden with four groups of trees were planted. Turning to the map of 2013 after the construction, there was a
majoy
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major
change since all trees in the garden were removed to make room for other facilities.
Furtheremore
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Furthermore
, a mammals'
section
moved to the other side of the hall, which contained new zones
such
as a human
ongins
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ongoing
origins
display and cafe on its right. The latter was placed in the bottom corner of the building, next to which was a shop.
Although
each
section
was isolated by
wall
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, mammals and a shop existed in the same room. Another important feature is that a new
section
for the ice age was added on the left side of the museum with a small area for insects
on
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in
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its bottom right corner. The place of dinosaurs, the hall and
lobby
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the lobby
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remained the same as in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words section with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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