You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017.

The provided bar graph gives information about the number of participants, specifically adults in various sports, in a particular region in two periods of time 1997 and 2017.

Overall

, it can be seen that tennis was the most common

sport

in both years, followed by rugby and football.

However

, basketball was not popular in the first year

while

cricket was in the second year.

To begin

with, the number of adolescents who played tennis Was the highest main

sport

in 1997 and 2017 with 15,000 participants and about 55,000 players, respectively. Followed by rugby and football, the two sports witnessed a dramatic increase in 2017, around 49,000 and 98,000 individuals respectively. Swimming remained stable in 1997 and 2017 approximately 35,000. Why

sport

witnessed a slight rise in 2017 almost 32,000.

On the other hand

, basketball, and cricket were the least

sport

among them. Basketball sports were about 9000 in 1997,

However

, in 2017 experienced a significant grow nearly 22,000. Cricket decreased dramatically in 2017 almost 5000 people

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sport with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

167 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Participation levels
Major sports
Noticeable changes
General trend
Increase/Decrease
Stable
Sport-specific
Popularity
Speculate
Societal changes
Technological impact
Growth in sports culture
Influential events
Prediction
Future trends
Data analysis

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017.

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Social media badly impact our relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?