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The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates how many
films
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 are produced by five different countries over a period of three
years
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 from 2007 to 2009.
Overall
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, the
number
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 of
movies
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 made by
country
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 A stayed the highest,
whereas
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 the least quantity was produced by
country
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 E throughout the given period.
In addition
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, the
quantity
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number
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 of
films
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 published by
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country
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countries
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 B and C witnessed an increase in the final year. In terms of the highest producers within three
years
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,
country
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 A made around 90
movies
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 in 2007 and 2008.
However
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, the
number
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 decreased to just above 75 in the final year.
On the other hand
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,
country
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 B released around 50
films
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 in the first two
years
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 before rising to approximately 70
movies
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 in 2009.
While
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 the
number
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 of
movies
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 published by
country
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 E remained the same at around 10
films
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 per year, the quantity produced by
country
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 C grew gradually from around 5
movies
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 in 2007 to around 20
movies
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 in 2009.
Moreover
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, the
number
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 of
movie
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movies
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 produced by
country
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 D fluctuated within three
years
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words films, years, number, movies, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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