You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

 

You should write at least 150 words
The bar chart illustrates how many
films
are produced by five different countries over a period of three
years
from 2007 to 2009.
Overall
, the
number
of
movies
made by
country
A stayed the highest,
whereas
the least quantity was produced by
country
E throughout the given period.
In addition
, the
quantity
Change the quantifier
number
show examples
of
films
published by
country
Fix the agreement mistake
countries
show examples
B and C witnessed an increase in the final year. In terms of the highest producers within three
years
,
country
A made around 90
movies
in 2007 and 2008.
However
, the
number
decreased to just above 75 in the final year.
On the other hand
,
country
B released around 50
films
in the first two
years
before rising to approximately 70
movies
in 2009.
While
the
number
of
movies
published by
country
E remained the same at around 10
films
per year, the quantity produced by
country
C grew gradually from around 5
movies
in 2007 to around 20
movies
in 2009.
Moreover
, the
number
of
movie
Change to a plural noun
movies
show examples
produced by
country
D fluctuated within three
years
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words films, years, number, movies, country with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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