The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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two pie

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illustrate the proportion of online shopping in four retail sectors in the year 2005 and in 2010, where the retail areas are

Electronics

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&

Appliance

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,

Food

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&

Beverage

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, Home

Firnishings

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Furnishings

and Video Games.

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2005 online sales, more than a third

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people

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of people

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spent money on

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and

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;

where

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a

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quarter

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spent on Home Furnishings.

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,

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and

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was the third

perority

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priority

of folks.

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, only 18% was video

games

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expenditure. In view of 2010 pie data,

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and

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was the first

prefer

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of people and was 32%.

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, less than a third

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was

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and

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. As

campared

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compared

to 2005 the demand

of

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vidoe

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video

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increased by one in twenty

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percentage

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. Less than a

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fifth

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percentage

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per cent of

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people spent money on Home Furnishings.

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, it can be seen

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2005 the online sale of

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and

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Appliance

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appliances

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was in first one;

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however

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however,

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in 2010

Food

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and

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took over.