The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustrate the proportion of online shopping in four retail sectors in the year 2005 and in 2010, where the retail areas are Fix the agreement mistake
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Electronics
& Appliance
, Food
& Beverage
, Home Firnishings
and Video Games.
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Furnishings
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and Appliance
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quarter
percentage
spent on Home Furnishings. While
,
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Food
and Beverage
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priority
Lastly
, only 18% was video games
expenditure.
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game
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and Beverage
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of people and was 32%. Replace the word
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Secondly
, less than a third percentage
was Electronics
and Appliance
. As campared
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compared
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video
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percentage
. Less than a Replace the word
per cent
fifith
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fifth
percentage
people spent money on Home Furnishings.
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per cent of
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2005 the online sale of Correct your spelling
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and Appliance
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Food
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