Homo- sapiens are living
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lifestyles. In
21stChange the article
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century, the burden of contemporary life is impacting
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personal and family relationships in
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manner.
According to
me,
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kinds of pressures are built up
due to
lackCorrect article usage
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of understanding and
also
due to
satisfying their desires.
Firstly
, the major reason behind the ruining of healthy
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is that
people
are turning to be
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. Getting into details,
due to
diverse competition
people
are trying hard to work around the clock to
their lavish demands. Day by day,
expendituresCorrect article usage
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of common
people
are expanding
due to
materialistic things.
Due to
this
,
people
are
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their most of
time
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earning and conflicts arise within families
due to
lackCorrect article usage
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of communication and understanding.
According to
studies, almost 25% of
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population opt
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means to earn money to satisfy their needs but their families
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due to
their illegal work.
Furthermore
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another reason for the
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concern is that so many individuals are
their ethical values.
People
are devoting their
time
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securing their jobs.
Due to
hectic schedules, parents and youngsters are not spending quality
time
with each other,
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why
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.
social media and
internetCorrect article usage
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are influencing
people
at
greaterAdd an article
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pace and taking the place of their quality
time
. To support
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factual data, a survey was conducted by
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university which concluded that around 70%
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are
with social media platforms. So, mainly
people
are not investing their
time
in maintaining their relationships.
To conclude
, I would pen off by saying that
people
ought to implement moral values in their
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and
also
try to satisfy their worldly needs rather than luxurious needs.