The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
amount
of phones sold (in millions) from 2006 to 2012. The companies featured areChange the quantifier
number
:
Nokia, Ericsson, Samsung, Motorola and Apple.
Throughout the years three out of 5 companies had a decreasing amount of retail, Remove the comma
apply
for example
in 2008 Nokia peaked with 475 million
mobile phones sold, but by 2012, that number had dropped to 335 million
. Ericsson and Motorola saw significant declines as well, the numbers falling by 46 million
for the first company and by 182 million
for the second one from 2006 to 2012
On the other hand
, Apple and Samsung had mounting sales, although
Apple had only started producing phones in 2007, the amount
of mobiles sold rapidly increased, starting off with 2,3 Change the quantifier
number
million
pieces sold in 2007 to 135.8 million
in 2012. Samsung, however
, has met the greatest growth in retail,with sales rising from 117 million
in 2006 to 396.5 million
in 2012.
In conclusion, the table shows the tendencies of the population throughout the year and the change in people’s choices when buying devices.Submitted by acaitaz on
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