The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1990 - 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph illustrates
families
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owning cars in
the
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Great Britain between 1990 and 2015.
Overall
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it can be understood from the graph that during that period of time, the
percentage
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of
families
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who owned no
car
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decreased
while
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the number of
families
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owning two or more cars
has risen
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significantly. In 1990, over 30 per
cent
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of
families
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owned
one
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car
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,
however
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, more than 50 per
cent
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of
families
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did not own a
car
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. The
percentage
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of
households
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with no
car
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decreased to reach fifteen per
cent
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in 2015. In 1990, only ten per
cent
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of the
households
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in
great
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Britain owned two or more cars.
This
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number increased significantly to reach about 42 per
cent
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in 2015. meanwhile, the
percentage
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of
households
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that owned
one
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car
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rose to nearly 60 per
cent
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in 2005 but it dropped again and fluctuated to reach 42 per
cent
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in 2015.
overall
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, the
percentage
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of
households
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with no
car
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has dropped between the given years,
while
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the
percentage
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has risen in
families
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who owned
one
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or more than
one
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car
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words families, percentage, car, cent, one, households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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