The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summrarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram illustrates the steps of reproducing artificial items.
This
process is a cyclic trend.
Overall
, the process consists of seven stages beginning with collecting artificial materials and ending with producing new products.
According to
what is shown,so many used tools are thrown in the trash.After that, the materials are collected from the big garbage.
Next,
they are transformed into many special factories by a truck. In the Cycling Center, the bottles are sorted by employee to check their validity and size. After that, when the bottles are sorted they are compressed in a block. Afterwards, they crushed the blocks before the pieces were washed by a machine.
Then
the plastic parts were put in a machine in order to produce plastic pellets. As soon as the pellets are heated the raw materials are formed.
Finally
, different types of products are distributed in supermarkets
such
as clothing, pens, bags, and containers. These new products are used until it is eliminated.
Submitted by shareifaalsiyabi on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: