The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates the percentage of citizen's consumption of
coffee
and tea during the last
4 weeks, in 5 different Australian metropolis.
Firstly
, going to a café was almost unanimously the most popular in all the cities. Despite the gap being very small, only Adelaide was the second choice after buying instant coffee
. On the other hand
, in cities like Sydney or Melbourne, frequenting cafés was by far the most popular choice of more than three-fifth
of the population!
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three-fifths
Secondly
, instant coffee
was the second most chosen among the interviewees. In fact, in Sydney, Melbourne and Adelaide was between 45 and 50 points percentages, while
in Brisbane was chosen by more than half of the population. In the end, in Hobart almost reached the 60%!
Lastly
, acquiring fresh coffee
was the least preferred in all of the towns. For example
, in
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Adelaide didn't even reach 35%, instead
, in Hobart roughly 40%. In conclusion, in Melbourne between 40% and 45% chose it, but the city which preferred it was Sydney, where the people who chose it was almost 45%.Submitted by alessandro.talese on
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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