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The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.
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The provided table gives information about the
number
 of emigrants from five different
countries
 in Europe (Britain,
Germany
, Italy, Poland, and Spain) living in each of the mentioned nations in 2011.
Overall
,
Germany
 and the United Kingdom are the most popular destinations for emigrants. At the same time, Poland is considered a nation with the greatest tendency to leave its country compared to the others. The data indicates that a significant
number
 of individuals have chosen to relocate to the most developed
countries
 in Europe,
such
 as
Germany
 and Britain. The total
number
 of
expatriates
 residing there was 1,198,000 and 1,037,000, respectively. To be specific, the Polish were the most dominant group of
expatriates
 in
Germany
, accounting for over half a million individuals.
Likewise
, in
Germany
, Polish people
also
 contributed to the most significant
number
 of migrants in Italy, with 106,000. In Britain, Italy outnumbered all other nationalities with a population of 556,000 migrants. Spain, ranking
third,
welcomed 861,000
expatriates
 in 2011, with nearly half of them being British (391,000).
Although
 Poland was a great supplier of migrants, it was only
favored
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 by a small
number
 of people from other
countries
, which was merely 6,000—less than a fifth of total
expatriates
 spread across five European
countries
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, countries, germany, expatriates with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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