Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Health

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The health

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of the citizens is crucial to any country’s government and devising ways to keep up or improve it is equally important.

While

some say that increasing the number of

sports

amenities is a must, others believe

this

to be an ineffective solution and encourage

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other methods.

Although

building up

such

facilities

can help to a certain extent, I believe the latter would be more beneficial because

diet

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the diet

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is a crucially important facet of

health

and

availability

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the availability

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of

sports

centres alone would not suffice. On the one hand, it is understandable why some people would make a direct correlation of

health

with

facilities

. In cities, these days, it is very uncommon to find a playground or park to play around or go for a walk.

This

might be concerning for parents as their children don’t have a place to play

sports

like badminton or cricket in the evening and

as a result

, might be forced to stay back at home, impacting

health

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their health

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.

For example

, in Nagpur, a small

sports

-cum-playground complex for the public was opened up recently, resulting in some influx of visitors and promoting

healthy

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a healthy

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lifestyle to a certain extent.

On the other hand

,

health

cannot be alone improved by

exercises

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exercise

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. One of the primary factors contributing to good

health

is diet. No amount of workout or outdoor activities can ensure a healthy body

untless

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unless

it is assisted with rich food consisting of protein, complex carbohydrates, fibre, and vitamins in sufficient proportions. Governments need to work on providing services to promote the culture of healthy eating through adverts or some programmes in local communities.

For example

, a gym-cum-park built in the outdoors of Mumbai in 2022, has been abandoned by the daily visitors

due to

lack of motivation or time. Many

such

parks or

facilities

have

infact

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in fact

been built and now lying almost unused,

due to

lack of discipline, motivation and other factors which

goes

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on to prove that other measures are more important. In conclusion, it is important for the countries to devise methods in the domain of healthy food and

keeping

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up the motivation in raising the

health

index of citizens rather than just building the

sports

facilities

.