The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph illustrates how many people have visited an
island
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on
the Caribbean Change preposition
in
ocean
since 2010. Capitalize word
Ocean
Overall
, a group stayed on cruise ships and others remained on Linking Words
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island
both Add an article
the island
demonstarted
a growth in numbers over the period with some fluctuations.
In 2010, the highest Correct your spelling
demonstrated
number
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were
in Change the verb form
was
the
favour Correct article usage
apply
for
those who stayed on the Change preposition
of
island
, with 0.75 Use synonyms
million
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visitor
. Change to a plural noun
visitors
This
Linking Words
number
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incresed
to 1.5 Correct your spelling
increased
increases
million
in 2013 before reaching a plateau until 2015. The plateau displayed a small decrease of 1.25 Use synonyms
million
in 2016 Use synonyms
then
it backed to its original figure of 2015.
On the Linking Words
contraty
, those who stayed on cruise ships were Correct your spelling
contrary
lesat
at the beginning of the period Correct your spelling
late
demonstrated
a strong upward growth in their numbers. Their figure Correct word choice
and demonstrated
of
2010 of 0.25 Change preposition
in
million
soared to 2 Use synonyms
million
in 2017.
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To sum up
, the total Linking Words
number
of travellers to Use synonyms
this
particular Caribbean Linking Words
island
experienced a Use synonyms
dramatical
growth. Their Replace the word
dramatic
number
doubled to 2 Use synonyms
million
by 2013 and continued to increase to reach 3.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2017.Use synonyms
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