The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
water
usage in
San
Diego
,
California
, and the rest of the world with different
purposes
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
a majority of
water
is used for residential
purposes
in
San
Diego
and
California
while
the rest of the world uses the highest proportion of its total
water
for agriculture. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 60% of total
water
in
San
Diego
is consumed for residential
purposes
, followed by
California
, with 39%, and
finally
, worldwide, with only 8%.
By contrast
, the rest of the world has the highest proportion of
water
used for agricultural
purposes
, which is over three-fourths of the total, at 69%, the second highest figure is in
California
, at 28%, and the lowest figure
is
Correct your spelling
in
show examples
San
Diego
, at only 17%. There are not any significant changes when we look at the percentages of
water
used for industry, particularly, the figures for
San
Diego
and worldwide are the same, with 23%, and the figure for
California
is higher than theirs by 10%.
Submitted by writingeilts on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, san, diego, california, purposes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
  • patterns
  • sustainability
  • practices
  • surprising
  • exceptionally
  • improvements
What to do next:
Look at other essays: