The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
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The line graph illustrates the average weight of
meat
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a person consumes weekly in a particular European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
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,
while
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beef and lamb
consumption
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went down during the given period, people consumed more chicken in 2004 than in 1979. It is noteworthy that the
consumption
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of fish
meat
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has remained essentially unchanged. Beef was the highest consumed type of
meat
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at the beginning of the period, with around 220
grams
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consumed per week.
This
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number
then
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fluctuated until 1989 when it fell into decline. Lamb
consumption
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similarly
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displayed the same downward trend, falling from 150
grams
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to its lowest figure of approximately 55
grams
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in 2004. Contrarily, chicken
consumption
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maintained a steady increase over the years. The first year that chicken
consumption
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overtook that of beef was in 1989 to become the largest sort of
meat
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consumed in that country. Fish,
however
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, showed a minuscule decrease
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not worth mentioning. It levelled off between 60 and 40
grams
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meat, consumption, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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