The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart displays the temperatures
through out
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throughout
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the
year
in
London
, New
York
and
Sydney
,
whereas
the table illustrates
amount
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the amount
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of energy received
evey
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every
year
from the sun in these 3 locations.
Overall
,
London
and New
york
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York
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experience the warmest days in the middle of the
year
,
while
Sydney
receives the lowest temperatures in the same duration. New
York
also
receives the maximum
hours
of sunshine per
year
. A detailed examination of the first graph reveals New
York
and
London
start off the
year
with just under 5 and 10
degrees
, respectively, but show consistent growth every month, peaking at just under 30 and 25
degrees
, respectively, in the middle of July. They both follow a similar downward trend towards the end of the
year
. Contrarily,
Sydney
starts off the hottest at over 25
degrees
and gets colder over the next few months, stabilising at approximately 15
degrees
in July. The second half of the
year
is a mirror image of the first half. From the table, it is evident that New
York
recieves
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receives
the maximum sunshine every
year
, at 2535
hours
, closely followed by
Sydney
at 2473
hours
and
lastly
, by
London
, at just over a thousand
hours
every
year
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, london, york, sydney, hours, degrees with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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