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The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates daily oil
production
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 in four different countries from 2000 to 2004.
Overall
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, a fluctuation was
rocorded
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recorded
 in the amount of oil
production
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 in Nigeria,
whereas
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 there was a moderate decline in Congo.
Chad
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 and Somalia changed obviously dramatically.
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 with, in Nigeria, there was a fluctuation in the number of daily
production
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 of oil. It was clearly a drop below 190,000 in 2002, and it
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then
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rised
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rose
 above 200,000 again in 2003.
Next,
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the table shows that the
production
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 underwent a fall in Congo. It dramatically decreased from 27,500 to 203,000.
On the other hand
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, there were significant rises in
Chad
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 and Somalia. In
Chad
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, It maintained the same level in
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 three years, and it certainly increased from zero to 8,000 in 2003. It
also
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rised
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rose
 considerably almost seven times in 2004.
However
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 there was a noticeable growth in Somalia, it
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increased
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 from 5000 in 2000 and reached the same amount as
Chad
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 in 2004, at 50,000.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, chad with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rised" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Production levels
  • Trends
  • Increase/decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Stable
  • Peak production
  • Output
  • Significant changes
  • Yearly comparison
  • Global production
  • Correlations
  • Patterns
  • Volume of production
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