The given pie charts provide data about the distribution of school funds in the UK over the period of 20 years from 1981 to 2001.
The pie charts give information about the division facts of
school
costs in five categories the
United Kingdom in two decades in the years 1981 to 2001.
Change preposition
in the
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that over the whole period of 20years
was the most significant Correct your spelling
20 years
school
expenditure to
the Change preposition
on
teachers
salaries . Change to a genitive case
teacher's
teachers'
While
,
the least significant Remove the comma
apply
school
spending to the
insurance. Correct article usage
apply
Also
, that
it clearly shows that the resources and furniture have a levelling off at one decent. Correct word choice
apply
Furthermore
, others
employees were highest in all periods.
Correct quantifier usage
other
1981
, Change preposition
In 1981
teachers
salaries experienced a significant increase reached by 40% . Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
Follows next
spending by Verb problem
Next
others
Correct quantifier usage
other
workers
fees accounted for 28% . Interestingly, resources Change noun form
workers'
worker's
for example
, books and furniture for instance
, equipment remained the same school
expenditure accounted for 15% percentage .
Total spending school
wages for workers in 1991 , instructors wages respectively was the highest in 2 decades in 1991 accounts for 50% . Whereas
, others
employees were decreased rate 22%. Resources like books Correct quantifier usage
other
was
increased by 20% . Furniture like equipment , Change the verb form
were
was
sharply Unnecessary verb
apply
go
down Wrong verb form
went
reached to
5 % .Wrong verb form
reaching
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.
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