The given pie charts provide data about the distribution of school funds in the UK over the period of 20 years from 1981 to 2001.

The given pie charts provide data about the distribution of school funds in the UK over the period of 20 years from 1981 to 2001.
The pie charts give information about the division facts of
school
costs in five categories
the
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in the
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United Kingdom in two decades in the years 1981 to 2001.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that over the whole period of
20years
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20 years
was the most significant
school
expenditure
to
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on
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the
teachers
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teacher's
teachers'
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salaries .
While
,
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the least significant
school
spending to
the
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insurance.
Also
,
that
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apply
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it clearly shows that the resources and furniture have a levelling off at one decent.
Furthermore
,
others
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employees were highest in all periods.
1981
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,
teachers
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teachers'
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salaries experienced a significant increase reached by 40% .
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spending by
others
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other
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workers
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workers'
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fees accounted for 28% . Interestingly, resources
for example
, books and furniture
for instance
, equipment remained the same
school
expenditure accounted for 15% percentage . Total spending
school
wages for workers in 1991 , instructors wages respectively was the highest in 2 decades in 1991 accounts for 50% .
Whereas
,
others
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employees were decreased rate 22%. Resources like books
was
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increased by 20% . Furniture like equipment ,
was
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sharply
go
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went
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down
reached to
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reaching
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5 % .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 3 times.

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