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the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
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 information on consumer spending on items in five different countries in 2002. In the food, drinks, and tobacco
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, turkey had the highest consumption of 32.14%. It is followed by Ireland with 28.91%, Spain with 18.80%, Italy with 16.36%, and Sweden, with the lowest percentage of 15.77%. For the clothing and footwear
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, Ireland, Spain and Turkey all had a similar percentage of around 6%. The highest consumer falls to Italy,
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 the lowest falls to Sweden, by 9% and 5.40% in respective order. The
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, the leisure and education
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, had Turkey as its highest consumer, with 4.35%. Italy and Sweden both had around 3%, Ireland with 2.21% and
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 Spain, with only 1.98%. In conclusion, The food, drinks, and tobacco
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 had the highest amount of consumption in five different countries. The second most popular
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 was the clothing and footwear
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, and the least popular was the leisure and education 
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  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
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