The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The two maps illustrate the development of an
isle
for facilities that travellers can use. Correct your spelling
aisle
Overall
, there are many new establishments that would appeal to tourists in comparison to the empty island before.
Firstly
, the island only had trees around and a beach, with no other buildings to attract visitors before it was advanced. In addition
, the sea with a depth of 100 metres surrounded the area. After construction, there were new attractions to the place such
as accommodations for travellers and restaurants as well as
a reception.
Furthermore
, swimming was allowed at the beach in comparison to the prohibition before the improvement of tourist facilities. On top of that, vehicle tracks which were not present before were built and the footpath at the beach remained, with an addition to more footpaths, leading to the accommodation, after renovation. Before and after the works of improvement, the depth of the sea remained at 100 metres, but post-construction, a pier was built with boats included for the use of tourists.Submitted by d.adeliasong on
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