You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain the important event; apologise for the situation; suggest a new arrangement.

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Dear David, Hope you are doing well. Our meeting will be soon,

however

, I would like to change the dates. If you remember, I told you that my sister is pregnant. Since our meeting coincides with the day of her discharge from the hospital, U would like to reschedule our

meet

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in England. I apologize for the inconvenience, but I do not see any other way out. I know how difficult

this

meeting was for us since we have not seen each other for a long time, but I am sure that we will find new options for a tour of England. I will warn our travel agent about these inconveniences. Let's just move our dates forward two weeks.

Moreover

, in just a couple of weeks, a famous artist will perform in London and we could go to the concert. I think

this

will be the best option for us. Let me know what you think about

this

. Waiting for an answer. Kind regards, Nick

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

165 words

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