You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain the important event; apologise for the situation; suggest a new arrangement.

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Dear David, Hope you are doing well. Our meeting will be soon,

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, I would like to change the dates. If you remember, I told you that my sister is pregnant. Since our meeting coincides with the day of her discharge from the hospital, U would like to reschedule our

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in England. I apologize for the inconvenience, but I do not see any other way out. I know how difficult

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meeting was for us since we have not seen each other for a long time, but I am sure that we will find new options for a tour of England. I will warn our travel agent about these inconveniences. Let's just move our dates forward two weeks.

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, in just a couple of weeks, a famous artist will perform in London and we could go to the concert. I think

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will be the best option for us. Let me know what you think about

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. Waiting for an answer. Kind regards, Nick

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single idea per paragraph

To achieve a higher score, ensure that each paragraph clearly focuses on a single idea. This improves readability and coherence.

suitable writing tone

While your tone is friendly and appropriate, making the letter slightly more formal would suit an IELTS exam better.

complete response

You have provided all the required information in your letter, which helps achieve a complete response.

suitable writing tone

Your letter maintains a friendly tone, which makes it pleasant to read.

greeting and closing

The letter has a clear greeting and closing, improving overall cohesion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

165 words

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