The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Louvre, located in France, stands as the most popular art gallery, drawing an impressive 9
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The National Museum of Korea and the Museo del Prado in Spain share the fourth place, each welcoming 5 Use synonyms
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