The pie charts and table illustrates the information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US in the years 1988, 1992, and 2000.
The pie figure and table give data about the whole value and sources of
fish
imported to the United States over a period of 12 years.
Overall
, it is clear that
fish
imported had a great value due to
the fact it cost billions of dollars
in
all three different years. And it came to the US from a variety of sources.
Looking at the information in more detail, in 1988 the profit of fish
transplants hit 6.57 billion dollars
. And it starts to increase dramatically to reach 8.52 billion dollars
in only 4-year
gap. Correct article usage
a 4-year
Moreover
, it continued to grow in 2000 to hit 10.72 billion dollars
.
Furthermore
, in 1998 the vast majority of fish
transplanted came from Canada with 60% output. Whereas
. In 1992 other suppliers were the biggest producers of fish
with 46%. In 2000 other suppliers were at 42%. Canada was about 28%. While
China was at 30%.Submitted by reem.rz112 on
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