Some people think that the fictional violence portrayed on television is harmless entertainment. Others disagree and think that it encourages violent behaviour. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent years,
films
or series directors have deliberately filmed some violent scenes
in order to make viewers enjoy watching their films
. Some people
argue that because they think these scenes
encourage violent behaviour
, while
others say that horror and action movies
should have these scenes
because they keep an audience engaged deeply with a film without boring. I believe that this
fictional violence
portrayed on TV is harmful and encourages violent behaviour
, especially for children
.
On the one hand, the depiction of fictional violence
is an essential part of some movie promotion due to
most people
prefer these films
. These movies
with violent scenes
give the viewer scenes
of entertainment and enjoyment, at the same time they know these fictional violent scenes
are unrealistic and they just enjoy it. For example
, in 2021, the Batman movie got the highest viewership in the UK, people
and children
were watching know that there were unrealistic things such
as his car had weapons or he was flying around the city, despite knowing humans can not fly. However
, all these violent scenes
have firearms or guns only for fun and entertainment. From my point of view, this
kind of scene unconsciously has a negative effect on children
’s behaviour
, even if it is just for fun.
On the other hand
, films
and series have violent scenes
are pose a threat to the child’s mentality, thus
the child becomes more violent, nervous and angry with his peers and parents owing to these movies
. Moreover
, psychology studies demonstrate that children
imitate everything they see and are quickly affected by it. For instance
, violent movies
consequently
have a huge impact on children
’s personalities, attitudes and behaviour
, which might have these scenes
stuck in their minds for a long time. From my perspective, parents ought to be more careful about what their kids watch on television or YouTube because it can impact them negatively.
In conclusion, recently fictional violence
scenes
are important to make entertaining films
because people
are interested in watching this
exciting film. Others think that films
have violent scenes
that are dangerous for children
and people
’s behaviour
as well. However
, in my opinion, children
should be never allowed to watch movies
promoting violence
because it has bad effects on their emotions and psychological.Submitted by ghazl.1998g on
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coherence cohesion
Try to clearly separate different points of view in your essay and ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence that ties back to the central argument of that paragraph.
task response
It might be helpful to provide more diverse examples and further elaborate on them to strongly connect with your assertions and arguments. Examples should directly support your main points.
coherence cohesion
The essay introduction clearly outlines both perspectives on the topic and provides a personal opinion, which sets the stage for a balanced discussion.
coherence cohesion
The conclusion effectively summarizes the writer's stance, reiterating the key message of the essay.
task response
The essay covers both views as required by the task and offers a personal opinion, fulfilling the task response criteria.
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