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The table below gives information on customer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on customer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides details on the percentage of customer expenditure on different
categories
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 of food/drink/tobacco, clothing/footwear, and leisure/education in five different
countries
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, namely,
Ireland
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, Italy,
Spain
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, Sweden, and
Turkey
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 in 2002.
Overall
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, Turkish and Irish people spent the most on food/drink/tobacco,
while
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 other
countries
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 had the lowest number of expenditure, despite
this
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 they were higher than other
categories
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. clothing/footwear, Italians invested the highest in wearable items,
whereas
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 other
countries
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' customers bought fewer products. Leisure/Education experienced a lower digit of spending as compared to other
categories
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 among all
countries
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. Looking at details related to food, drink, and tobacco,
Turkey
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 had the highest ratio of spending at 28.91%, meanwhile,
Ireland
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 had a slightly smaller proportion than
Turkey
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, approximately 4%.
Spain
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, Italy, and Sweden spent almost
similarly
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, accounting for 18.80%, 16.36%, and 15.77%, respectively. They experienced lower data, but in spite of
this
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, they dominated all other
categories
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. Regarding clothing and footwear, Italians invested the most at 9%, even as
Ireland
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,
Spain
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, and
Turkey
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 all made similar purchases at around 6%, except Sweden, which faced the lowest figure. In leisure and education,
Spain
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 and
Ireland
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 had experienced the lowest rate, about below 3%,
while
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 others had above 3% investment.
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