The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and assumption of electricity in 2014.
The provided bar graph demonstrates the top ten nations which generated and consumed
electricity
in 2014.Overall
, a first glance at the chart reveals that China is the first country in both production and consumption while
Korea is the last
one in the year given.
It is clear that
China and the United States not only generate electricity
the most, by 5398 billion kWh
and 4,099 KWh
, respectively, but Fix capitalization
kWh
also
they are at the high rank for utilizing electricity
as opposed to other countries (5322 KWh
for China and 3866 KWh
for the United States). Furthermore
, Russia is devoted third place itself and the most interesting point is that the amounts of consumption and production are approximately the same in this
nation, by around 1000 billion kWh
. In contrast
, the least amount of usage and generation of electricity
is allocated to Korea, Rep (485.1 KWh
for production and 449.5 for usage).Submitted by ieltsacademic77 on
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