All cars that burn fossil fuel should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Many argue that
cars
that burn fossil
fuel
should not be used,
instead
, people should purchase electric
cars
. I believe that electric
cars
are more convenient and efficient than fossil
fuel
cars
. These vehicles that burn fossil fuels should be banned,
due to
their negative impact on the environment that leads to hazardous outcomes.
For example
, these
cars
produce a huge amount of carbon dioxide that detrimentally affects the environment in many ways.
For instance
, carbon dioxide increases global warming which is a very dangerous phenomenon to humans, animals, and everything on
earth
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. Another thing is it causes air pollution which can lead to various diseases,
in particular
, lung cancer.
In contrast
, electric
cars
are more environmentally friendly and convenient for many reasons.
First,
they work on electric energy that doesn't harm the environment as much as other kinds of
cars
, which decreases the risks of air pollution and other environmental issues.
Second,
you can charge them whenever you want at home without the need to drive to the gas station.
This
continues to my third point, gas,
this
type of vehicle doesn't require any gas which can save you a lot of money looking at how much the price of it is rising every day. In conclusion, electric
cars
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cars'
car's
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benefits outweigh the advantages of other
cars
in terms of
comfortability
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and health,
furthermore
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furthermore,
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their disadvantages are few compared to fossil
fuel
vehicles.
Therefore
, they must replace fossil
fuel
cars
to improve the quality of our earth.
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task response
Ensure that the introduction clearly outlines both sides of the argument before stating your position.
coherence cohesion
Use transition words more frequently to enhance the flow between ideas and paragraphs.
task response
Provide more detailed examples to underscore the points you make, particularly on the economic aspect of electric cars.
task response
You have articulated a clear and strong stance on the topic by favoring electric cars over fossil fuel cars.
coherence cohesion
The essay is logically organized with clear supporting paragraphs.
task response
You provided relevant consequences of fossil fuel usage and benefits of electric cars, making your argument compelling.

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