Museums and art galleries should show local history and culture instead of work from different countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (Write 250 words.)

Normally,

museums

are the places where

people

can appreciate a story and opinions of artists through their works.

Moreover

, plenty of creative works are inspired

from

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historical and cultural literature in their own countries, which

people

in the area would have appreciated the background stories relatively.

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several other countries are represented in

the

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public

museums

, to attract visitors for accessing easily.

However

, there are many advantages from those perspectives which are discussed in the following. On the one hand, the national museum or

art

gallery has been established

for

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the objective of gathering and promoting the history and

culture

of the

country

.

As many

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other

museums

also

have these sections of exhibitions normally,which

is

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the

place

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places

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where

people

can enjoy the

art

and study the important events appropriately for both the tourists and the next generation.

Furthermore

, it is easier to distribute the unique and remarkable

culture

of the

country

in a short time among the atmosphere of

art

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, especially

in

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people

who enjoy visiting the

museums

, which are

people

who enjoy the cultural and artistic aspects as well.

On the other hand

, the stories of the

country

is

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not enough

for getting

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the attention

from

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visitors. From the

travelers

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viewpoint, it would be better if several

art works

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artworks

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differ in the internal and external influences. Actually, many cultural and historical figures of the

country

are involved with plenty of other different aspects which are inspired by other countries.

For example

, Thailand's historical background is influenced by Myanmar and Cambodia which

are

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many similarities in cultures and traditions. As

the

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result, representation in the different regions

fulfill

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how the

culture

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and historical stories are told by pieces of

art

in

museums

or

art

galleries completely. Personally,

art

and

culture

are endless, it is an abstract

concept

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which

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people

will try to understand in both related and

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automatically as norms of humanity.

Therefore

, more experience is more information and it is worthwhile to come and visit the

museums

.