The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.
The given table compares the five
highest ranking
countries for the tourism industry in terms of the number of Add a hyphen
highest-ranking
tourists
and travelers’ expenditure in two years: in 2012 and 2013.
It can be clearly seen that the largest amounts of tourists
visited France from 2012 to 2013, while
the USA earned by far the most revenue over the period.
Looking at the table more closely, in 2012, 83 million
people visited France and the second most popular tourist is the USA , with 66.7 million
traveler
. Spain and Change to a plural noun
travelers
china
received just under 58 Capitalize word
China
million
people, while
Italy ranked fifth with only 46.4 million
tourists
. 2013 saw a rise of between 1 to 4, except for China, falling by 2 million
.
Tourists
in the USA spent twice as high as any other country increasing from $126.2 billion
in 2012 to $56.1 billion
in 2013. In the meantime, Spain received the second highest
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second-highest
amounts
of Fix the agreement mistake
amount
tourist
, rising from $56.3 Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
billion
to $60.4 billion
, followed by France, China, and Italy. The interesting feature is that despite falling the number of tourists
, Chinese revenue from tourism rose by 1.7 billion
in 2013.Submitted by zizi03199 on
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